Cross County

I started running and as I turn the corner I see something silver I had another. Look at the back of me and it look like it had really big ears I wanted to faint then I started slowing down I had a little rest when I got back up there was something fat sitting under the tree it was grey I was running as fast as the grey fat thing he was chasing after me but he was running like a snail. I was running to the rugby post I looked back I saw that it was an elephant. He looked at me, he looked angry I was running through the tires and over the blue beams and through the finish line. The teacher wrote my name on the piece of paper and what my place was and when it was lunchtime we got our metals.

 We are leaning how to add punctuation in our story's I found it hard because I had to keep starting over and over. Next time I wood like to try not starting over again